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IELTS ESSAY TIP 11

نویسنده :بهنام فرقانی
تاریخ:چهارشنبه 2 دی 1394-09:34 ق.ظ

MORE FORMAL OR LESS FORMAL?


In IELTS writing task 2 you'd better write more formally. This requires you to know some points about that. Noticing how following sentence differ from each other can be a big help to learn it.


MORE ACADEMIC: In the modern world, we frequently no longer rely on food that has been grown locally, but we have become accustomed to buying produce from all over the world. While this trend has some clear benefits to consumers, I would argue that overall transporting food over long distances is a negative.

LESS ACADEMIC: In the modern world, we often don’t rely on food that has been grown locally, but we have got used  to buying food from all over the world. While this trend is good for consumers, I think that overall transporting food over long distances is not a good thing.


MORE ACADEMICThe strongest argument against importing food is environmental. Studies have shown that transport and the use of fossil fuels is one of the leading causes of global warming and climate change. This means that if we want to lead a greener lifestyle, we should be trying to minimise transport and this includes the unnecessary transport of foodstuffs.

LESS ACADEMIC: The biggest argument against importing food is environmental. We know that transport and the use of fossil fuels is the biggest cause of global warming and climate change. This means that if we want to lead a greener lifestyle, we should try not to use transport so much and this includes transporting of foodstuffs when we don’t have to.


MORE ACADEMICAnother point that needs to be considered is the impact of transporting food on local farmers and traditional ways of life. Again, there is good research to show that farmers and smallholders are unable to compete in price with the supermarkets that import cheap, and often low-quality, produce from abroad. This is not just a problem for local farmers who are likely to go out of business, it also has an impact on weakening traditional communities that rely on those farms for employment and trade.

LESS ACADEMIC: Another point is that transporting food is bad for local farmers and traditional ways of life. This is because farmers and smallholders cannot compete in price with the supermarkets that import cheap, and often low-quality, produce from abroad. This is not just a problem for local farmers who will go out of business, it also weakens traditional communities that  need those farms for employment and trade.


MORE ACADEMICA further consideration is that food that has travelled across the world is considerably less healthy than locally grown, fresh produce. The  point is that the further food travels before it reaches the consumer, the less fresh it will be and any nutritionist will confirm that fresh food is fuller of vitaminsTherefore, it would be preferable if supermarkets and other stores did not transport food from other countries.

LESS ACADEMIC: We should also think how food that has travelled across the world is not as good for you as locally grown, fresh produce. This is because if food travels a lot of miles before it reaches the consumer, it won’t be very fresh and experts say that fresh food is better for youSo, in my opinion, supermarkets and other stores shouldn’ttransport food from other countries.


MORE ACADEMICIn conclusion, I believe that the trend for transporting food over long distances is undesirable because it is environmentally unfriendly, threatens local communities and results in less healthy options for the consumer.

LESS ACADEMIC:In conclusion, I think that the trend for transporting food over long distances is wrong because it is not good for the environment, it is bad for local communities and means consumers eat less healthily.



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